Bogard then gives a scientific case that shows why natural darkness is essential to humans. Happiness is an emotion every human being has experienced to a certain degree in his life. This question is asking you to choose sides, then support your position. Paul Bogard strongly believes that natural darkness should be preserved. For those prompts for which you do not write a complete response, I would encourage you to brainstorm a list of examples and details that you could include in a response as well as create an organizational outline.
Writing—2: This response demonstrates limited cohesion and skill in the use and control of language. The rest of the world depends on darkness as well, including nocturnal and crepuscular species of birds, insects, mammals, fish and reptiles. Overall, this essay does not provide enough evidence of writing ability to warrant a score higher than a 1. Moreover, the writer demonstrates an understanding of how these ideas and details interrelate. These include one , one , and two sections. Conclude your essay touching upon all the points covered in your essay. Originally published December 31, 2015.
Hence, my way of thinking is different from that of people working at newspapers in America today. Plan your response, and then write an essay. The unscored section, usually referred to as the variable section, is used to pretest new questions or evaluate new test forms. The response is organized clearly around the three points identified in the introduction, and each body paragraph stays on-topic. The passage will be from a published article that was written for a broad audience. Four of the five sections contribute to your score.
Darkness tends to evolve all over the world for a variety of things. The candidate should attempt this by stating his opinion firstly, and then through the length of the essay providing ample proof to sustain this opinion. The writer also sees the connection between darkness as a source of solitude and it inspiring countless numbers of philosophers, artists, and stargazers for millennia. After all, where would we be if great people, both in history and in our own time, did not try to have more and to improve themselves? They know as well as I do that those 50 cents per copy is almost free. It shows that even a city that is literally famous for being constantly lit can practically address light pollution in a manner that preserves the beauty of both the city itself and the universe as a whole.
The public instinctively senses this as well, and distrusts the media. The essay gives you an opportunity to show how effectively you can read and comprehend a passage and write an essay analyzing the passage. Therefore, it should not be difficult to state whether or not it is a choice or an accident. Once that happens, I would worry about micropayments on the internet. The concluding paragraph develops the essay rather than just restating what has been said and is also successful for its precise word choice and complex sentence structures We must see the strength and beauty in the darkness, and remember how our world survived without lights. Digging through daily articles to search for inspiring ones can sometimes feel like a futile treasure hunt.
Step 1: Work the Prompt What in the prompt requires you to weigh in? The writer provides various details from the text that support these points. The creative prompt might be ambiguous and require the student for building the entire essay almost by himself or herself. Other communities are finding success with simply turning off portions of their public lighting after midnight. The writer captures the central idea of the source passage the importance of allowing more darkness to fill the earth for distinct health and ecological reasons and accurately quotes and paraphrases many important details from the passage. Students are expected to use grammar and vocabulary which conform to Standard English. Each response has received a separate score for each of the three domains assessed: Reading, Analysis, and Writing.
Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. He notes that there are a variety of nocturnal and crepuscular species of birds, fish, mammals, insects, and reptiles worldwide. Overall, the response demonstrates advanced reading comprehension. On the same grounds, the argument that newspapers are losing money due to free internet access does not hold. The response to the prompts must also be creative and make use of animated explanations.
In his personal story Bogard uses great imagery making the audience picture what he saw and maybe make them want to experience it too. He then goes on to state how Paris has taken steps to exercise more sustainable lighting practices. Additionally Bogard says that the night sky has inspired countless numbers of philosophers, artists, and stargazers for millennia. Irrespective of that, the candidate should have a healthy balance of both views, with a heavier inclination towards his personal view, which should be supported by his inferences from everyday life and his own experiences. Man is never on the square — he uses up the fat and greenery of the earth. Choose the side that you will find easier to defend with strong examples; which side you choose does not matter. Another sense that Bogard uses is feeling.